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  1. Car'Mel
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    not new but i have a question and i'm not sure where it goes

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by Car'Mel, Aug 8, 2007.

    o.k. i do urban books and i know that that type of writing isn't allowed on here so i was wondering what should i name a book that is dealing with a teenage girl (16) who used to go with this boy and they broke up because he kept lying to her then he moved in her neighborhood so he missed her and she as she missed him so she started going over to his house and they made up so i day one of his boys came over and he liked her so all 3 of them got it on and popping then the boy suggested that he had the teenage girl work for him and then she became something like his wh*** and he wa also a drug dealer and stuff like that i had the name's

    1.Whoring for my ex
    2.You can't turn a hoe into a housewife

    somewhere in them areas anyone have any ideas of what to name the story. thnx
     
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    This would go into creations I am pretty sure. You can pm a moderator and get them to move this thread to the appropriate area and that way you shall get the help you require with this. :)

    Torana
     
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    Daniel I'm sure you've heard the rumors. Founder Staff Contributor

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    You're looking for a title?

    Personally I'd go with #2.
     
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    As would I. It has more wit about it than the first.
     
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    Daniel I'm sure you've heard the rumors. Founder Staff Contributor

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    Plus the slight alliteration adds to the title in a positive way.

    Good luck.
     

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