I have finished writing my first book, and now I am reading and editing the alpha version. However, since English is not my native language I fear what I wrote is not genuine or good or that it is written using too simple language. Here is and example of a dialog. No one said anything, they were only looking at Arthur in silence. “OK, I see, that you can't wait eating, so let's get started,” he announced. Everyone started their breakfast. “Did I mention to you that the salads were prepared by Tokutei?” Lian’s eyes grew wide. “Do you ever sleep?” Tokutei felt her cold look. “Of course I do, I made them after the morning training.” “Ah, alright. I just thought, you spent the night in the kitchen.” “No, I’m not so crazy,” he replied, then grabbed the bowl with salads and placed some on his plate. Any suggestions? What I lack most are gestures and facial expressions. Do you happen to have a list of those like shrug one's shoulders or frown?