I'm having some real trouble with a certain scene in my story. It's supposed to be somewhat suspenseful, but I feel like it's downright boring. My main character is getting kidnapped by a person whom she later falls in love with, and I'm yawning as I read over it. Should I add more emphasis on the character's thoughts, or more on her actions? Right now it's focused on her actions, but it's still somehow boring as hell.