Hi guys, I was wondering how vivid you think this paragraph is. Personally, I am quite satisfied with it, but since I have looked it over quite a lot I was wondering what the choice of words, length of sentences and description would do for an objective reader. Completely lacking in both context and explanation of what is going on, of course "His heart was racing. "What a strange dream" he thought, still startled while opening his eyes. The sun had already set, and the grasshoppers were no longer singing. His chest was itchy. Reaching a hand underneath his shirt, he felt that it was soaked with sweat. He shivered. It was considerably colder. Of the hills and fields, only a black silhouette was visible while the red hue of twilight filled the sky above the horizon. The birds had gone. Colonies of bats soared silently through the air above him, diving and ascending like a stack of leaves caught in the wind. Bewildered, he got up. He must have slept for hours."