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    One1Winged1Angel - Joint Weekly Poetry Contest (172) Winner

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Banzai, Dec 1, 2011.

    Hollow parachute
    By One1Winged1Angel


    Statues refusing to stand still
    cold blooded pacifists
    going in for the kill
    harmless barbarians
    a mouthful of fists
    for dog hating veterinarians

    Strange waters fueling the fire
    Twelve honest men
    nothing but liars
    experienced virgins
    with verbal strengths
    for hemophobic surgeons

    Strong moon on a sunny night
    innocent thieves
    using dull knives
    ground bound helicopters
    scattering leaves
    for the uncaring doctors
     
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    Love it!

    At first it just sounds like a mysterious poem, but then you pay closer attention and you notice the funny paradoxes! Love your work.
     
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    Thank you very much :)
    Nice that someone actually appreciates what you're trying to get across .
     
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