Sorry for the slow and bumpy start everyone, but I am not feeling too well and I am not very satisfied by the garbled mess I forced myself to produce. I'll try again first thing in the morning!
they are Mac's chars (npc or not), so yes, you would get slapped lol. but if you need to interact with them do your action then wait for them to react.
Okay I posted something, but I am editing again it's mostly Robin's part that I want to get right. It's not everyday that fourteen year olds are being forced on the frontlines, so I am trying to convey as clearly as possible why he is there, without being to blatantly obvious about certain plot points that I want you to uncover It's hard to balance the two, but I am doing my best.
Mac i think i can already guess considering the one character you made before... wasn't his name Robin as well??
Yup! But his storyline is quite different this time. Fun fact, I was watching a WWII documentary yesterday and apparantely there was an officer called ... (I don't remember his first name) Montgomery! I actually saw that documentary once before, a long time ago, so I guess the name slipped into my subconscious...I don't know for sure though
that's wiered (and drat- i thought i actually had you this time! still need to blow your mind because i blew Exzalia's...)
@rhduke I updated my Robin post, be sure to check it again. @Keitsumah @Thomas Kitchen @Love to Write @schwuldubist @Mottahko Just to be clear, Gale isn't around the temple anymore. All Padawans have been escorted on that carrier ship (to who knows where), Robin is heading into the Temple and is trying to be found. Aside from the fact that none of your characters would recognize him, he doesn't really look like a Sith. He also exchanged his lightsaber for Tristan's so that the red of his saber wouldn't give him away (he now has a green one). If anyone finds him, he would appear lost (remember, he wants to be found). Don't worry about what to do or say, things will resolve themselves soon enough.
but Vox would smell blood on him (and that he's not a member of the temple). so things may get a bit tense...
Blood? From what? I don't think blood would clinge to a lightsaber, besides, he swapped his lightsaber for Tristan's. You can go with it though, he'll have an answer ready.
okay lol, just checking, and i was saying blood on his clothes, but then maybe he got none on them anyways
Doesn't really matter. Vox could still be wary of him. Just to be clear the young ones on that ship have already already departed,there might be two or three left behind at most...
Gale and Hurricane (Progress...) by Keitsumah on deviantART my art teacher saw the outline sketch and said that if i wanted to put it in my final i should shade it in... so after a week of terror i have begun... (the arrow is so i know where the lighting is coming from)
u have no idea -that bit alone has taken me two days. but then i go on-and-off, so it's not constant work but...
