1. tkdlover14
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    Outline Help!

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by tkdlover14, Nov 16, 2014.

    I made an outline to organize the information in this article, but I need my outline looked at to see if there is anything I need to add, remove and/or change in my outline to make it correct for the article.

    Here is the article:
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    Here is the outline I made:
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    This looks suspiciously like a school assignment, which is a no-no on this forum.
     

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