Well i have written previously on these forums requesting your thoughts on my script. I'm here to ask a different type of question now, but first here is the pitch: As the captain of his high school football team, Sean struggles with a secret passion he has...to prove science wrong and create a working perpetual motion engine. He has long had an obsession for physics; one that's been buried since he was a child. Wanting to escape his clichéd lifestyle shaped by football, he sets out on a journey to inevitably create what mankind believes to be "impossible." Armed with his intermediate knowledge and the passion to pursue the unreachable, his journey begins... So I am curious, do you think it would make more sense to steer the plot in the direction of Sean's struggle as a young adult with his passion, or actually make it about the object itself, and how he accomplishes creating it?