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    Poison Love ~ Baywriter 86th poetry contest winner

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Torana, Jun 27, 2009.

    Foam
    86th Poetry Contest Winner
    Baywriter - Poison Love

    Congratulations

    Delicate sipping, intricate sifting,
    the beads come out. Carbonation.
    Passion seethes, bit by bubbly bit,
    and shamelessly, cool liquid
    breathes on a tongue. Then bites,
    sweet to electric acid. Scathed holes,
    once hollow, spew locked emotion.
    Hearts buckle. The drink foams,
    missing lips, hitting hard, and
    on our knees, we cry.




    Poetry Contest 87

    This week's theme (courtesy of red matrix) is: Dumpster Diving
     
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    Congratulations Baywriter! Nice use of metaphor.
     
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    Thanks everyone. And congrats to all the other writers for doing such a fantastic job!
     
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    well done

    well done, did you win the competition with this piece. It's very good. Heather
     
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    Congratulations! That's a great poem.
     
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