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    "Porn Versions" of Your Stories?

    Discussion in 'Erotica' started by T.Trian, Dec 9, 2013.

    For a while now, KaTrian and I have toyed with the idea of writing porn versions of our stories, just for shits and giggles. Essentially we'd keep the same plot, same characters, same world, but, well, the characters would end up fucking in scenes where ordinarily there would be no fuckage and the sexualities of the characters would be... more fluid.

    When we watch movies, TV shows, read books etc. we often go "what if this happened instead of that," so naturally we do that with our own stories as well, usually in a comic fashion, and it occurred to us that it might actually be a lot of fun to write these dirtier versions of our stories, like writing sex into a scene where normally it would be wholly inappropriate (like two guys tussling, one gets a boner during their wrestling bout, and there we go even if the original version only had a "normal" fight scene).
    Our stories do have graphic sex in them, so it wouldn't add any new heights as such, just more sex, but it would also be interesting to see how such changes would eventually affect the plot, the characters etc.

    For instance, in our current WIP, a naive, innocent rookie is lying in her bunk after her first day in the armed forces, contemplating everything that happened during the chaotic day. She's sleeping in the same room with her squad, five guys. We thought it'd be a fun experiment to change that scene into one where she actually ends up having group sex with all the guys at the same time, but that the plot remains the same, for the most part anyway.

    Has anyone else here done anything like this?
     
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    Huh... sound scandalous and hilarious... Like Mad Libs with sex. Can't say I've tried it, but I can't say I haven't turned a decent story moment or two into a sexual one. Those stories are buried with my old computer (hopefully), but they certainly tiddled my imagination. If you do it for laughs (no pun intended there), it may be one of the most humorously sexy stories ever. or maybe One of the sexiest comedies might be a better description. lol Whatever, it's funny!
     
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    That's pretty much the idea. I think it was first conceived (no pun intended either... well, maybe...) when we were watching LOTR, the scene where there's this grand music playing in the background and Aragorn, Legolas, and Gimli are running across various mountain landscapes all heroic and shit and I turned to Kat and said "imagine if in just one shot the guys were running naked and in the next shot they'd be clothed again." Or if the same would've been done in Conan the Barbarian's identical running scene. We thought it would've been hilarious, but nobody "real" ever does anything weird like that, and then when we saw Medieval Land Fun-Time World and figured how awesome it would be if the folks doing the GoT series actually went with it and did a movie like that for real, we thought it'd be fun do it with our works even if we end up ridiculing our stories / characters six ways from Sunday.
     
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    Funny you mention LotR. :) There are any number of scenes where I paint in my own big smoochy kiss between Merry and Pippin or Frodo and Samwise. I mean seriously, that was a literally epic journey for Frodo and Samwise and never once did they feel the need to "help out a fellow hobbit" to break all the stress? Not once? Come on..... ;)
     
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    @Wreybies, yeah.

    I think one of the most attractive notions in this idea is to put characters into situations they would usually avoid and see how they react to them when they are essentially "forced" into them by their gods, i.e. the author(s), like our MC, who is a very non-sexual, almost asexual, and very shy, inexperienced young woman, so it'll be interesting to see what happens when we toss her in the middle of a horde of throbbing cocks.
     
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    Hahaha! :D That's hilarious.

    So, my favorite "fill in the snog" scene from LotR is near the end, just after Frodo and Sam have run out from Mount Doom, the ring is destroyed, lava flowing all around them on that rocky outcrop, death is surely coming and they reminisce about the things they miss from the Shire. All I can think is: Sam stuck with you, never doubting you, even when you chose Gollum over him. Even then! When you couldn't finish climbing the slope of Mount Doom, Sam carried you on his wee little hobbit legs so that the task could be done, which means that in truth Samwise Gamgee is the real hero of the story while Frodo gets the credit. He did all of that and you're about to die and he mentions the luscious taste of strawberries in spring. Come on, Frodo! How thick can you be? That boy wants a snog from you and if there's anyone in Middle Earth who deserves a snog in his final moments, it's Samwise. Do the right thing and don't forget to give'um a good grope while you're at it. ;)
     
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    That's pretty much how it'll start. :D And soon enough she'll be introduced to the joys of simultaneous double penetration and fellatio plus one guy per tit to do some nipple suckage. And they take turns.
    Yes, we're twisted, yes, it's a somewhat different ending to the scene than in the original version...
     
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    Everyone who is fapping gung ho about this thread should check this out.
     
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    So, like, we're assuming infinite time here? Time to write a novel and then time to write a porn version of that same novel?????
     
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    @123456789, not really. See, I and KaTrian are multidimensional beings, so we write the porn versions in an alternate universe / alternate timeline, then save it all on a memory stick, and bring it back to this reality. I mean, how else could we juggle writing, work, uni studies, a band / a guitar trio / competitive shooting for myself, tending to horses / riding for Kat, and boxing + gym for both of us?

    In all fairness, we haven't started writing this yet, and most likely it'll be something we do while we're on the road (this time of the year we have to visit a bunch of relatives, most of whom live some 450km away = lots of time spent in trains / buses) and since it's more difficult to concentrate fully (which is more crucial when editing the umpteenth draft of our main WIP, which is almost ready, trying to catch all those little punctuation errors, wrong prepositions etc.) while traveling... porn version!
     
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    I'll consider doing this with my stories. To two of the characters, sexuality is a big thing. With one of them it's a little understated, and the other's hot, so...

    It'll be interesting to see them in a context other than sci-fi action.
     
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    I have considered this again and again... but I keep flaking out on myself because I am STILL just in the process of character creation and the building of an outline for a story, which is otherwise going well.

    Does doing this with RP storylines count, though? I was doing one-shot "porn stories" based on the storylines two years ago, but that was only after I had gotten to know the characters. I am working on a blank slate now... and these are all new characters. I have NO idea who they are yet.

    I have no way of knowing if the stories I had written are even good. I am too embarrassed to ever show them to the public, heh heh.
     
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    ha! Has anyone seen the new Disney flick Frozen? There's a scene where princess Anna forces a guy to take her on a ride in the snow and he has every excuse not to. All of a sudden she shouts "take me up the northern pass!" Well you can imagine my howls. At least ten times I've watched it with molly and it never gets old!
     
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    Hm. Must be sociolinguistically subjective? 'Splain me, Lucy. :oops:
     
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    We could start an entire thread about sex(uality) and Disney. I swear Bambi was flirting with Flower, but then they both found ladies in the end. Guess it was just a phase then.
     
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    when princess anna shouts "take me up the northern pass!" i hear, "take me up the back passage!" maybe its just my warped brain but I'm half waiting on the guy to jump her bones right there. I bet there are some funny cartoons on the editing floor of that studio
     
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    I try to keep my writing chaste as I have no talent to write sex. God knows why, but I just can't.
    However, every time I read a book or some epic journey such as LotR or whatever, I can't imagine the characters never stopping for sex. It seems they go for years in each other's company but don't do squat about their own needs... Prolly how fanfiction started, lol.

    It's why I like Game of Thrones, lots of stops for sex and none of it is even graphic (mostly). It fills a certain hole in the journey just right.
     
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    @A.M.P., agreed on all points. Our stories do contain quite a bit of sex (well, at least more than one fairly graphic sex scene per MS), but there are so many scenes where interruption for sex would be so inappropriate and unexpected, we have a hunch it might be a goldmine of comedy. On another board there was a thread once called "What's the most inappropriate time to get a boner?" and (imo) the best and shortest answer was a part of what gave me this idea. The reply? "In a fight."
     
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    I find that a perfect time to get aroused.
    Nothing like physical confrontation to bring out your inner dominant animal.
     
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    In the porn version of our current WIP, there will definitely be a scene where two guys tussle, one gets a boner, and then one thing leads to another...

    If I think a similar scene but with women doing the fighting and fucking lacks the comic potential of the male equivalent... well, does that make me a victim of social conditioning? :confused:
     
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    A little bit and no.
    When a guy gets a boner, it's obvious and easy to react to.
    When a girl gets hot, her little mound may not show as much.
    Also, aren't women less stimulated by highly aggressive situation than men?
     
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    There's a film called Book of Love where this very thing happens to Simon Baker. The things that stay on a person's hard drive.... [​IMG]
     
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    It seems to be a fairly common comedy trope that a bunch of guys watch women fight, hoping for that slim chance the ladies would kiss at some point :p
     
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