Help! I've changed the character names so it's not searchable. Dear Anne A Gent After twelve years of avoiding physical contact, Jane Doe finally wants someone to touch her – and he’s determined to stay out of reach. John Stag is honest about being a liar. He’s open that he has a Big Bad Secret, and if he revealed it she’d want nothing to do with him. But she can’t help trusting him, enough to overcome the fear that’s crippled her dreams since she was a child. John is determined to stay away, and Jane is determined not to let his secrets scupper her one and only chance at love. Neither of them will give in, until John’s worst nightmares come true - his explosive secret detonates, and Jane is caught in the blast. Now that she’s had fingers burned, will she ever want to touch him again? GREAT TITLE is a 90,000 word, dual-perspective contemporary romance. Any feedback is welcome. My aim was to give a good feel for the stakes and conflict - at least, as good a feel as you can get in 200 words.