The latest short story I've been working on is Science Fiction/Horror and has a jumbled time. In the first draft, my readers were having a lot of difficulty following the order of events, so in my second draft I decided to start each section with a header that stated the date (in relation to the events of my story) rather than just having asterisks to separate the sections. For example; what was *** is now Five months before darkness... So, what I wanted to know was, would it be better to be more specific with the section headings and say, "147 days before darkness..."? Or, is it better the way that I have it? I am leaning towards the more specific, but I want to know what you all think. Thanks.