Discussion in 'Plot Development' started by LittleFire, Feb 18, 2010.
delete this please.
That's not really a plot, more like an overview...
Shorten the first two paragraphs because they're a bit redundant. Expand the last a bit. Stop being so vague, or you won't hook many.
A story concept means nothing. I can tell you now, it has been done before. What matters is how you write it, the characterization, the flow, the imagery, all of it.
There's no benefit in asking what other people think of the concept! They'll either say,"Sounds great," or, "it sounds like a ripoff of..."
If the idea stirs you, write it. Then ask people what they think of the final story. After they tell you what they don't like about it, revise it, usually several times, until you're happy with it or until you throw up your hands and say the hell with it.
Please read this thread about What is Plot Creation and Development?
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