1. Jack Vlahovic
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    Jack Vlahovic New Member

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    review my writing please?

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by Jack Vlahovic, May 8, 2013.

    Delete this please, posted in wrong place
     
  2. Yoshiko
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    This isn't in the right place for us to review writing - and you're not eligible to post work for review yet either. Take a quick look here for a guide on how this forum works.

    However, from a quick glance at your first piece I would advise that you study up on basic punctuation (capital letters and apostrophes especially) and common spelling errors (e.g. there/their/they're).


    Welcome to the forums! :)
     

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