After a few comments of critique I decided to revise a poem and post it in the original thread as a new comment. I'm not sure if this is going to garner any attention. I also tried adding a "revised" tag to the title of the thread, but it won't let me. And I don't want to edit the original thread post, because I want people to read the original poem, then the critique, and then the revision. Should I just wait it out and hope people stumble back(this seems unlikely)? Keep in mind I have been reviewing other's work as much as I possibly can. This is my second poem, and I would really enjoy some review. Suggestions?