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    ronmatt- Weekly Poetry Contest (103) Winner

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Banzai, Feb 6, 2010.

    city morning
    By ronmatt


    bridge tops stretching out from mists and fogs
    reaching to heights searching out suns
    twenty thousand miles or more
    at least

    heavy moisture blanket as dew carpeting streets
    from top to bottom of towers thick gray menacing

    candle light defused in the murk of it
    sounds of creaking wood wheels muffled
    voices of shouting men muted

    morning has arrived
    or has it

    settling of denseness
    to milky water cream
    cloudless cold sky looks down
    blue and the bridge is touched

    morning has arrived
    to my dismay
     
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    Well played ronmatt, a well contested week won with a deseving entry.
     
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    Congratulations, Ronmatt. :) Very nice poem.
     
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