Lately I've been reading a lot of contemporary fiction that is loaded with intentional sentence fragments. I find that although it's grammatically incorrect it has a better sound to it. I think it's effective because it feels like something that somebody would actually say or think. An author who does this to a great deal is Chuck Palahniuk (best known for Fight Club) Lately I've been intentionally constructing sentences that are fragmented for this very reason and I'm quite satisfied with them. Thoughts?