But hey, it's just a story, right? There are no hidden truths to be seen. At least, not by most people. Right, Kingy-Wingy?
Wellll This is actually Garrison's third appearance in an RP Well second in chronology As this game takes place in 2000 and the one before was in 1996 And if you see on the main board of the RP section there is a game called DM which is currently on hiatus but that's latest in timeline so far. So his mentions of Roxy's and other things are actually recorded in text on this site already XD
And his hobby is staring at the back of his eyelids because he likes to sleep. Right? Fine. Call me paranoid. Seriously though, you should take fucking charge and whip the employees into shape.
This happy-go-lucky attitude your character has is completely out of character for someone who's supposed to be a leader.
Oh FB He's but a simple man and does not like to burden life with things like that. It's rare Garrison gets to be leader and he wasn't the biggest fan of his last employment. To much movement. So he's simply enjoying these new people he's meeting. Just a fun group to chill with XD more play is much fun then work. He's not into whipping people into shape And no why would you be getting on nerves? XD
Because I'm trying to bring out your inner antagonist. Every writer needs to focus on their inner antagonist if he or she is to write anything more than something along the lines of, "It was a great day and we had a good time. Who wants Lucky Charms and booze?" Conflict--and overcoming conflict--is at the heart of every good story. The lost inventory and dead animals were a good start, but since your character obviously doesn't give a shit about any of that, Chunk may have to do something drastic. Like call King. And I'll create the character to go along with it, too. I'll make a BOSS, a man on a mission, a man who's losing money because all his employees are pissing the day away. I'll put some FIRE into the story, believe you me.
The story has just begun, only on pg 2, we usually wait until after characters are introduced to bring out antagonist/bigger conflict (there always is an inner antagonist with Kingtype's writing...that makes me laugh a little knowing him ). The story is fast-paced, but we're setting up the foundation so to speak. Even if everything does seem sporadic (it's a strange place with strange people), we do have plenty planned for the story and with the boss, don't worry. Give it some time and the fire will come.
Ivan's the only one doing her job. The rest of you guys... tsk, tsk, tsk. Also, Chunk just stole store property (the gerbil). He's a dead man, he just doesn't know it yet.
Oh deary me! Conflict and being an antagonist.....hurting others players! I don't know if I can do that....:/ That sounds horrible I don't wanna hurt anyone
PFFFFFFFFFFFTTTTTTTTTT! @FabulousJewels , you havn't been in any of King's RP's yet, so I'm letting your comments off the hook. You have NO IDEA how evil King can be. He has clear knowledge of how to work in an antagonist. As @JessWrite said, be paitent. Hell is coming... And knowing that...I still joined this RP. What was I thinking? RUN BALE RUN!!!!!
Me and Jess put together a little pre-sequel before we go back to DM This is MM Takes place before DM but after BM We are gonna continue DM later this year but we wanted to have a little fun on here
Still would like to do HC someday to but what with life and my own solo writing, other peoples games who I'd like to join (if they happen this year) and these other two (MM/DM) HC's on backburner.
