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    Short Story Critiques needed

    Discussion in 'The Art of Critique' started by Pinoize2099, Aug 9, 2007.

    Will be putting most of my works on this little blog as time passes. Please read and critique! Brutal honesty please. The link is on the sig!
     
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    Sorry Pinoize,
    I gave it a shot but white on black literally kills my eyes. These old eyes just can't take it.
     
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    and many forum members don't like to go elswhere to have to read work... to get max input, you need to post it here... or at least an excerpt...

    do you know that if you have your stories posted on your site you will not be able to sell them to magazines that only buy first rights [= virtually all of them!]?...
     

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