I love slowing down speech... I think it adds more reflection... But I'm not sure if I'm doing it the proper way. An example sentence: "Her whole house, even the bathroom, has pink carpets." Becomes "Her whole house... Even the bathroom...has pink carpets." The first pause slightly longer, by being seperated into two sentences. It reads to me the way I want it to, but is it right? I'd love to have absolute control of timing, but I guess that's impossible in text.