Before we start, just let me state that I'm new here, and I hope to feel accepted here. But anyway, my story, Sakura the Rabbit. The story's title refers to the main-protagonist of the same name, as she quests to resurrect her deceased fiancee, Rurisagi the Rabbit, by collecting four phoenix-feathers to resurrect Xenia the Phoenix, who has the power to help her restore her dead fiancee, while saving the land of Xiombus from a millenium-old empire, the Purifiers. Along the way, she encounters and befriends the following characters: Kokoro the Cat: An assassin questing to redeem her former-friend-turned-Purifier, Vergil the Cat. Kyumi the Kitsune: Kokoro's adoptive-daughter, who quests to find and reunite with her long-lost grandmother, Kitsumi the Kitsune. Kitsumi the Kitsune: Kyumi's long-lost grandmother, who orphaned her to save her life at the expense of becoming the Purifiers' new slave. Hikari the Echidna: An apprentice high-priest questing to surpass her long-deceased master, the previous high-priest. Haruman the Monkey: A former-Purifier who sides with Hikari the Echidna to redeem his deceased-father's Purifier-ways. Kira the Lizardess: The heir to the count of the city of Vhalia, who teamed up with the Anti-Purifier Resistance Movement to reclaim her home city from the Purifiers. Templer the Rat: Kira's right-hand man, as well as a husband and father to two two children, who was trained by his father, the sheriff of Vhalia, to become sheriff himself anytime the city is reclaimed. Elliot the Hawk: Descended from Xenia the Phoenix, he quests to redeem her millenium-old ancestor for unintentionally forming the Purifiers. However, I would like some suggestions to making the story better than it's supposed to be. Can anyone help me write it well?