the problem I have at this point is I know the story I want to tell, but for the life of me I can't make it sound interesting. I start writing, get half a page through read back and think to myself "this is so damn boring." the issue I have is trying to tell my audience a little science (well its actually science concept) without sounding like that weird chemistry teacher who constantly read the text in a monotone voice. The only reason I am not going to put up the science in the post is as I stated you would probably be bored in 2 seconds. can anyone give me an idea on a better way to do this?