Off and on, with a break here or there for another scene or so, it's been going for 12 pages. Same location, same situation. A bit of dialogue to break up the action/narration. But it's the same place, and the same scenario. I want to know should I shorten the scene up completely, or would it be alright to continue with the scene, but putting in a break here or there for flashback scenes and such? How does this work?