I have a problem. Clearly many, but I'll get to the point. I don't know how to refer to different people saying direct speech in this excerpt. Should I set it out as is: or should I set it out like this: I'm thinking the latter would make more sense if the MC was actually looking at the crowd, but she's not. She's only hearing it, so would I go with the first one or write it out as if she's hazarding a guess by their voices?