I had someone volunteer to read over my first chapter & make suggestions. One of the things this person had an issue with was a few sentences that explained movements or who was facing what direction. I can see how this sort of thing can be overdone and get annoying but he seemed to think it was inappropriate no matter what the situation. Should I not be describing these things? Examples: Jack walked off with the long tails of his pinstripe suit swishing back and forth. William moved to the front door and looked out through the massive windows that fronted the building. ***** William was facing Jack and watched him raise a hand to cover his eyes as he heard two more hits against the field in rapid succession.