Stage directing your characters

Discussion in 'Setting Development' started by doggiedude, May 1, 2016.

  1. ChickenFreak

    ChickenFreak Contributor Contributor

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    "Pinstripe suit" makes me think of a specific modern garment, which has no tails to speak of. I'd go with, say, "...tails of his swallowtail coat...".
     
  2. doggiedude

    doggiedude Contributor Contributor

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    Ohhh... I like "swallowtail"
     

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