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    Stream of Consciousness

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by zdoogy, Feb 24, 2013.

    I realize I can only find whatever indefinable object that will make my undefinable place on the existential road better. Whether it be a symbol, proverb, goddamn pistol, guitar, sweet melody, death, life, the universe, a fact, a direction, a heaven, a hell, a god, a demon, a mythology, a belief, an illusion, a fallacy, a comfort, a story, a role. I know it could be hidden in anything except the eternal nothingness which stands before me. I know that what I am looking for is in the crystalline ripple of self-reflective mirrors all shining their light on the hologram which is me and which is the one thing I cannot see. I realize the reality of unknown reality and space and time fucking with your mind until your brain cells conspire and turn your thoughts unkind. I hope to god that things are on an incline, steep or not, because if they are on a hill than I have found a living, dreaming, hell which may be a jar of my brain, but at least I am that error. Maybe that is all I am. An error in a boring fucking book that the publisher missed, an error in darwinian evolution that society has kept going with medicine so people craving for a higher reality find an ascension only in the temporary pill. But at least I am that error. And while space and time is infinite and incomprehensible I will walk a path through it that no one else will walk. I wish I could relate inclines and downslopes or any of my so little and poorly absorbed knowledge of math, but the only thing I am certain of is that certainty is uncertain.
     
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    and this has what to do with being a writer?

    "Need writing help? Discuss general creative writing tips and topics. Feel free to brainstorm ideas, share resources and discuss writing methods."

    am i missing something?
     
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    If you are I'm missing it too.

    zdoogy, what exactly are you asking or trying to say?
     
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    I was hopping that the 'eternal nothingness' might mean a blank page=writer's block?

    It's missing something, but it was a hilarious read.
     
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    not sure what he wants...but will say he sounded unhappy about it
     
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    I think this was posted to be read/critiqued. There doesn't seem to be an actual question here.
     
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    I was all geared up for a discussion on stream of consciousness. The Woolf fan inside of me is most disappointed.
     
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    You and me both.
     
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    On second thought, nah.
     
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    Oh no not another one?
     
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    Maybe the OP wanted to discuss it, but used Stream of Conscious to discuss.
     
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    it could be a hidden message?
     
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    La forza del destino...
     
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    Why don't people read the rules before posting?
     
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    Next time I want to make a popular thread, I'll post something that makes no sense. Seems to attract more attention than meaningful things. Just saying. :p
     
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    man i spend to much time in this place...
     
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