So I have been writing in a specific way that creates shorter sentences and I would like to hear your opinions. So here is an example: "A flash of light illuminates his still closed eyes, slowly he opens them. Without a single thought in his mind he starts looking around. He tries to take a step forward but instead he bumps into a piece of glass in front him him. He touches the glass, trying to find away around it. He is stuck." Especially the last sentence. Instead of writing for instance, "but he soon realises that he is stuck." Whats your thoughts about this?