So I'm currently in the process of writing a high/epic fantasy series, within my novel I will be referencing ancient history, myths, legends etc. I have realized after looking at my work, that my sentences are very long and have a lot of commas in them. Now this may be due to the kinds of books I read, some examples being ASOIAF, Lord of the Rings, Beowulf and other epic fantasies. Is it bad to have long descriptive sentences that may go on and on about say an item of clothing, discussing materials and colors etc. People who have seen my drafts have commented on how it reminds them of George RR Martin's lengthy sentences, of course I take inspiration from aspects of his style, but this is my own thing, my own ideas, my own characters and settings and that is how I wish to describe events and characters. What I'm trying to ask is if I should change my style or if its OK. Thanks for looking.