Sentence: Sofi's mother lived there alone the last twelve years, ever since Sofi’s father died. I don't like both occurrences of the Sofi's name. Possible alternatives: Her mother lived there alone the last twelve years, ever since her father died. Sofi's mother lived there alone the last twelve years, ever since her father died. In those two alternatives, does "her father" seem to any of you to refer back to Sofi's mother, and not Sofi? That's my potential problem with them.
I think whether or not it's clear that "her father" refers to Sofi's father would depend largely on the broader context of the paragraph. From this sample, it could go either way. I can certainly see where there would be a clarity issue and I also see that it could be taken properly. I think if you molded the prior and following sentence to add clarity, it could work just fine. ETA: Sometimes when I run into sentences like these, I find a way to split it into two just to eliminate any possible confusion.
It's Sofi's father who passed, right? I would just flip the last one: Her mother lived there alone the last twelve years, ever since Sofi's father died.
Thanks, guys. I like your suggestion @Wreybies. @SethLoki, yours works as well, but while I like that sentence the style would be out of place with the rest of the piece. @Spencer1990 I was considering splitting it into two, but I wanted to preserve the flow I had going if possible. I think Wrey's suggestion does that.
Ever since Sofi's father died 12 years ago her mother had lived there alone (solves the issue since her can only apply to sofi not her father)
Yeah, I like @Wreybies. The second two in the OP definitely made me think it was the mother's father who died.