Teach Me How to Edit!

Discussion in 'Revision and Editing' started by zoupskim, Jul 22, 2016.

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  1. Spencer1990

    Spencer1990 Contributor Contributor

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    I think italics are a great way to convey character thoughts. The only problem I see is when authors go overboard. I don't want to see massive amounts of italics or internal dialogue for that matter. Obviously, that's just a preference, but it's easy to go overboard.

    As for the OP: As others have mentioned, it's a stylistic choice. You do which ever fits the tone of your novel.

    As @Dr. Mambo has mentioned, italics are a good way to go about showing us it's the characters thought. Or you can use the tag "He thought." It's really just a matter of finding a balance.

    Play around a bit with it. Read it out loud both ways and see what you like.
     
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    jannert Retired Mod Supporter Contributor

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    They really did. I was totally impressed. Some of what the voice read out was in Scottish dialect (the real stuff, not the hoots mon variety) and it managed that pretty well.
     
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    jannert Retired Mod Supporter Contributor

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    Oh, good, I'm not alone. I nearly always edit from a print version. At least the first couple of times. That's how I prefer to read, I guess. I also read on Kindle, but find editing on Kindle (which you can actually do) is a real pain because the keyboard is so awkward to use.
     
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    I always edit (as opposed to revise) on a print version. (Revision = rewriting and addition of new material. I do tons of that.)
     
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    I am currently in the process of editing, so these thread will be helpful. :)
     

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