My main character(sazi)(pronounced: sa-say) is spying on another main character(foaghlore)(i know hard name it is pronounced: foe-lore) who is talking to a gravesite....should I quote what he says when he talks to the grave?
well Sazi was on his way to talk to Foaghlore...and happened to hear him talking to the grave.... not really sure how to write out this part, can anyone post a example?
Lol sorry if that dialogue is completely out of character. I don't know your characters so I just improvised. Did you mean something like that? I hope that helped..
yeah thanks....thats actually really good thanks (i even have alittle sad song playing to get me into the emotional side of my story *swallows lump in throat....* this is going to be a good sad piece of my story Edit: I just finished the sad scene(well for now, might be one more sad scene) I can't wait to reveal a piece of my story...It is so awsome