The Simile Game

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  1. JaShinYa

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    After pulling her knee socks out of the dryer, Shelly discovered they had shrunk down to a size no larger than her Avril Lavigne CD.

    Jell-O and A Walking Stick
     
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    The old man pattered down the sidewalk; his legs convulsed beneath his body like Jell-o, even though he carried a walking stick.

    toothpicks and fairies
     
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    Little Johnny was surprised to discover that the Tooth Fairy was as a small as a tooth pick!

    Q-Tip and a desk

    Also, just want to clear something up... The point is to make a simile, comparing the two items mentioned, not just to create a simile and use both words in the sentence, correct? I have seen it a lot in a bunch of posts and I just want to make sure I have the rules correct. :p
     
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    See the first post in the thread. That describes the "rules of the game."

    Please, no more than ONE post per member on any ten-post page.
     
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    Oh, not fair Cog. You didn't join the game.

    The giant picked up the miniature writing desk with ease as if it were a Q-tip.

    earrings and peanut butter
     
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    Mary handed her precious earrings over to the clerk. With regret, she watched them melt her jewelry down until it had the consistency of peanut butter.

    A watch and thumb tacks
     
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    Good job, JaShinYa! That was a good one.

    I waited and waited as the minutes passed by on my watch. It was worse than pins and needles. It was thumbtacks! Hee, hee :p

    Toadstools and clouds
     
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    The toadstools were so tall, it seemed that they touched the clouds.

    Tea and tap shoes
     
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    She was even annoying when she took her tea, knocking the cup against her teeth everytime she drank, like her dentures were tap-dancing on the china.

    A shoe box and a duvet.

    EDIT: I'm not sure that really counts as I used tap dancing rather than tap shoes, but never mind.
     
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    The crumbling shoebox kept his memories of yore; his recollection was still warm, thanks to the cardboard duvet.

    Whiskey and Sleds
     
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    The poor drunk took a step out the front door and slipped right onto his back, as if a sled were beneath his feet.

    Knitting needles and pudding
     
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    The knitting needle sliced through his skin as smoothly as a spoon through pudding.


    Oh yuck. Anyway, that's what came to me.


    A pen and toothpaste.
     
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    He pulled out a pen as thick as a squirt of toothpaste.

    iPod and bubbles
     
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    As we grow, our toys grow more and more expensive, for the iPod is to the teenager what bubbles are to the toddler.

    Thought I'd go for a philosophical standpoint ;)

    Notebook and honey
     
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    Before his corpse had gone cold, the other scientists gathered around his notebook like bees around honey.

    Love and oranges.
     
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    The orange molded in the cupboard, like love growing stale and forgotten.

    Bulldozer and Penguins
     
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    He smiled. She caught it. He put on his peg leg. She stopped looking down the sewer grate for her other shoe, and together then waddled towards each other across 5th Avenue in New York deaf to the moving van driver screaming at his windshield after discovering his brakes weren't functioning like love sick penquins ignoring the "danger Bulldozer crossing" signs on an ice floe.
     
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    He smiled. She caught it. He put on his peg leg. She stopped looking down the sewer grate for her other shoe, and together then waddled towards each other across 5th Avenue in New York deaf to the moving van driver screaming at his windshield after discovering his brakes weren't functioning like love sick penquins ignoring the "danger Bulldozer crossing" signs on an ice floe.


    Tar and an eyeball
     
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    David ran to the young Amos and turned the boy over. They had done it! They won! The bad guys had been defeated and all they had to do was go home. David recoiled in horror when he saw Amos' eyeballs black as tar in a metal can.

    Doctor and Screwdriver
     
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    A doctor without his license is like a screwdriver without a handle.

    Eating and driving.
     
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    As she sat opposite him watching him cram another porkbelly into his mouth it occured to her that he ate like he drove - recklessly and with little regard for pedestrians.

    Snails and Spaceships
     
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    Given the political difficulties at NASA, the newest spaceship was being built at about the speed of a snail.

    Laundry detergent and a pomegranate (oddly enough, these two items are what happen to be on my desk at the moment)
     
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    After the sinister bacteria had contaminated the house, the laundry detergent smelled like overripe pomegranates.

    Well, that was weird. Ummmmm. . . . . markers and quilts.
     
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    After thirty years, the fabric on the quilt began to fade like a used magic marker without a cap.

    Canned tuna and comic books
     
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    She opened the vintage comic book like a cat trying to open canned tuna.

    Golf club and candle
     

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