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    The Sweetest Valentine - check it out!

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    Awesome! Great poem Torana! :D
     
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    THank you :D :D
     
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    I liked it. You are a really good horror writer Torano.
     
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    Very cool. Congratulations.

    I love how you end it with those last 3 lines. :D
     
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    THanks Shadow :D

    marina, thank you. I loved the ending. I thought it was just the perfect way to end it. To give it a slight... innocent kind of feel to the ending.
     
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    Here's a link directly to the sweetest valentine--the link given just goes to the home page of the mag, and I'm (almost) too lazy to click my way through to the stuff I want to read.

    Good work. :) yours in Chaos, Scarlett
     
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    THanks Scarlett, and I fixed the initial post so that the link is there. I was meant to put that in, but completely forgot. Sorry people. Thank you again Scarlett. :)
     
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    Congratulations, Torana, Ms. Published Poet!

    Your poem is wonderful indeed - it just tears your heart out. :)
     
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    Congrats! I love the ending too.
     
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    THank you both :)

    And Cogito LOL! That is does! :D :D
     
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    congratulations Torana ... your peice is excellent and it must be amazing to see it published on an official site. :)
     
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    All I can say is. Thats one of your best Princess. You've come such a long way since those early days. Well done Princess. Now go and write more. ;)
     
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    thanks heather. It does feel pretty good to see it up there.

    Raven, thank you and I never do stop writing :p as much as I would like to, my inspiration keeps my fingers tapping away at the keys... I swear one day I'll wear my fingers down to the bone... now that would look awesome! hahaha!
     
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    Well it'd go with that Image of yours. :p

    Seriously though Princess you keep it up. I've said it for years now and firmly stand by it because this is living prioof but the more your write the better it gets. One day will come when you make a great amount of cash from this.
     

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