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    This is me.

    Discussion in 'New Member Introductions' started by binalharbi, Feb 26, 2009.

    This is me.


    When I write about my self and my family I be happy special in
    Malayu language. I have a big family but I leave them to study in
    Malaysia .I have a best friend like anyone.
    My name is Ali .I'm from Saudi Arriba .I'm 25 years old .I'm
    engaged now l will marry after this semester . . I have diploma of
    computer programming from College of Technology in Hail
    city.I'm friendly so I have so many friends some of them in Saudi and
    some of them not in Saudi .My hobbies writing , reading and play
    football .Before 6 years ago When I graduated from high school I went
    to Hail city in my country to complete my study then I study computer
    programming . It was first time for me to live with out my family .I
    can't forget this days because It was hard for me I couldn't cook and I couldn't arrange my time .
    I had story in that days ,Bader his my friend ,he allows slept beside me
    in one room .one day he had final exam but that day I didn't have
    exam I have after this day .I hard studied with him until 3 am then we
    slept .he exam start 8 clock but we didn't waked up until 9 clock he
    was lost his exam .after that I couldn't sleep if I have exam until I do
    my exam .one of my exams my teacher note me so tired then he asked
    me "Why look like so tired ?".I told him this story .I was happy when I
    study in Hail city but after I graduated from the college I worked at
    Alrajhi bank in Alqassem city of my country I still work 2 years .it was
    bad experience every day I have to meet many people some them
    respect us and some them didn't respect us also my boss didn't
    respect us than I thought to complete my study .I resigned from Alrajhi
    bank then came to Malaysia.


    note:I know my writing so bad but I wish to improver it with your help.
     
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    Welcome to the forums!
     
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    Hello Ali, Welcome to the Writing Forums.

    Posting your own work should not be among the very first things you do here. It is worth taking the time to see what other people have done to improve their writing, and see if some of it applies to your writing as well. That is part of why we require members to review other members' work before posting their own for review. On the other hand, there are no restrictions, other than content and copyright rules, on showcasing your work in your member blog.

    If you haven't explored the site yet, you should probably do so soon. Newcomers often gravitate to the Lounge, the Word Games, or the Review Room, but there is much more to be discovered if you poke in the corners. Remember to check out our FAQ as well, and be sure to read through the forum rules, too, to avoid any misunderstandings or hurt feelings. Respect for one another is our principal mandate.

    As for the Review Room, new joiners often wonder why we do things a bit differently on this site than on other writing sites. We emphasize reviewing as a critical writing skill. Training your eye by reviewing other people's work helps you improve your own writing even before you present it for others to see. Therefore, we ask members to review other people's writing before posting work of their own. The Review Room forums on this site, therefore, are true workshops, not just a bulletin board for displaying your work (and on that note, please only post each item for review in one Review Room forum). See this post, Why Write Reviews Before Posting My Work? for more information.

    And while you're looking around, don't forget to check out our Weekly Short Story Contest and Weekly Poetry Contest. They actually run more than one week apiece, but any member may enter, and all members are urged to vote for their favorites.

    Enjoy your stay here, and have fun!
     
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    Banzai One-time Mod, but on the road to recovery Contributor

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    *moved to the introductions forum*

    Hey, welcome aboard :)
     
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    Hi! Welcome to the forums. Review other's work first before posting your work, just a reminder, hope to see your work soon.
     
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    Hi and welcome! :)
     

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