Grammar This paragraph has been killing me for weeks

Discussion in 'Word Mechanics' started by Eric Byers, Nov 29, 2014.

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Does it read well?

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  1. Eric Byers

    Eric Byers New Member

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    What language is that friend? Thank you for your advice.
     
  2. KaTrian

    KaTrian A foolish little beast. Contributor

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    Finnish. Too obscure for your audience to notice it, so don't worry. :p
     
  3. Eric Byers

    Eric Byers New Member

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    I wasn't aware of that when i wrote it but it is awaome, fits the story well. :)
     

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