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    Throwing snowballs

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by Dogbird, May 7, 2016.

    Throwing Snowballs
    Even though it's extremely cold and uncomfortable the bare hands can make the best snowball. The difference between a baseball and a barehanded snowball is the sudden explosion from a bat, fingerprints , figure 8 stitches it has around its globe.
    The teenage arm on average can inflict upon the snowballs victim enough pain to ring the ear and cottonball the canal symoltaniously upon contact.
    At which time the victim cleans out his ear canal and bumps his head with the infected area flat to the ground to empty its contents with growing revenge.
    To step up the infliction gravel is added to the grenade of pain now created. To inflict satisfactory bodily damage with a smile.
    Upon releasing this sphere the creator wishes upon falling stars that it hits a bulls eye.
     
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    Excuse me?
     
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    Simultaneously?

    Otherwise I'm quite lost. I mean with the post, not the word ^^;
     
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    Oh well I tried
     
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    Maybe if you explain what you want to discuss we could help you better.

    If you just want some critique then I'll suggest you'll take a look at this link here http://www.writingforums.org/faq/workshop-requirements.76/
     
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