I have a problem. I seem to use the same sentence structure repeatedly throughout my writing. It's actually problem I've just recently noticed and now that I have, it seems to be much bigger than I thought. Here's a couple of examples: He catches my eye and smiles at me, but even he looks nervous. “What the hell is she doing in here?” I hear her say, but her voice sounds muffled in my ears. Another issue seems to be in my descriptions: The people on the street seem fuzzy to me, as though their edges have been smudged. I'm looking for ways to write these types of sentences more effectively without using the same structure over and over. Any help is appreciated. Thanks!