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    Discussion in 'The Lounge' started by Raven, Feb 5, 2008.

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    Earth


    At Zero 0700 Hours
    1 Billion Dead

    At Zero 0800 Hours
    More Than 5 Billion Will Die

    Some Will Fight

    Most Will Die

    A New Threat Has Emerged
    The Viskoroy

    9 Bombs Detonated

    More To Come

    Our World Lie’s In Ruins

    One Man

    12 Reasons


    Kagen


    Feel The Terror
    See The Terror
    Embrace The Terror
    Face The Terror
    Then
    Become The Terror









    Coming Late February 2008


    ©Written By Raven.
    ©2008 Raven Concepts All rights reserved.















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    :eek:

    Sounds good :D
     
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    Can't wait to see what this is all about...
     
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    900 billion dead? Wow.
     
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    Sorry, my finger slipped :p
     
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    Haha, what a dramtic advert my friend :p can't wait :D
     
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    "More Than 900 Billion Will Die

    Some Will Fight

    Most Will Die."

    That's either really grim, or just forgetfully repetitive. =P

    Yay for shameless advertising! Looks cool.
     
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    with only 6.6 billion here now, how the bleep could 920 billion even fit, let alone subsist on earth?
     
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    i smell a sequal
     
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    ...Um duh. It could take place in a universe. Expand your horizons... :rolleyes:
     
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    Now maybe if it said:
     
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    Can't wait to see the new book Raven! :D
     
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    Sounds good
     
  14. Raven
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    I'm polishing things off now so soon they'll be something to read.

    Just a note to those of you who know my style but Kagen is going to be very different to my usual style and basically its something I'm extremely pleased with so far.

    Thanks for the PMs about Rybok's Rat Pack also. I have more of Last Rites to come but for now I'm entering the world of publishing work and the Ryboks saga is proberly best kept from the net for now.

    Thanks all, for the interest in this Trailer. If this grabbed your attention wait until you read the fist part of Kagen. Evil is one word. ;)
     
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    So when will you be posting it here?
     
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    um, duh!... it's titled 'earth'!

    simon... so, what about my question re that population number?
     
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    I re-edited the Trailers intro.

    It is set in the future but the story focus's on Earth. as for population well blade Runner has an extremely larger population with over cowding as do most grim cyber punk strok dark sci fi stories.

    All i can say is much will be revealed once the story is available for reading. But I don't wont to give anything away until its posted.


    Thanks everyone for the PMs regarding your interest. ;)





    ~Raven.
     
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    Hmmm, if this is at all like Blade Runner than it will be definetley good. One of the best movies of all time! :D:D
     
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    I hear you there my friend I love that film. ;)
     
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    Raven as always you are excellent at gaining an audience for your writing. The suspence that you create is absolutely wonderful. Reminds me of another friend of mine acutually.

    It sounds really good that is for sure.
     
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    Thanks.

    This is very different to my usual stuff. Much deeper.
     

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