Well, run-ons have always been a huge problems for me. Often, when I try to split a run-on into separate sentences, it ends up turning into three separate sentence fragments that make no sense on their own. Fun times. This once sentence (if you can call it a sentence) in particular has been giving me some trouble lately: The only solution I can think of is to split that sentence after "inside my head" and start the next sentence with "the", like so: Then the next sentence has a bunch of different things going on, and I'm not entirely sure how to fix it without turning it all into blatant statements rather than fitting together fluidly like thoughts. (I'm told that this is called "showing, not telling language" if that helps to clarify what I said.) Any help would be greatly appreciated, even if its just telling me to scrap the entire sentence and rewrite it. Thanks in advance, and sorry for all the questions I've had lately!