Going over my novel I've discovered I've got this really big problem in with my writing. I use certain words WAY too much when describing what happens to a character. For example, in one page I counted I had used the word 'she' 20 times and 'her' 17 times, but I don't know what to do about it. Like what happens in this one page that I counted is about a girl who gets attacked and I use 'she' and 'her' when describing what happens. Like 'She did this' or 'she felt her tears run down her cheeks' etc etc. I just think its sloppy amaturish writing. But the thing is I LIKE what I've written in regards to everything else. It's just I can't seem to find a way of NOT using 'she' or 'her' or 'he' and 'his' all the time. Thoughts? Advice?