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    Weekly Poetry Contest (103) - 20,000 miles high

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Banzai, Jan 19, 2010.

    Weekly
    Poetry Contest
    One Hundred and Three






    Let's get poetrifying!


    The Rules

    • All entries must be on the set theme.
    • Only one entry per member.
    • No editing of entries once posted without my express permission (i.e. PM me and ask).
    • Poems must be titled
    • Entries must not have previously posted on the forums, and are not permitted to be posted for critique until AFTER the contest is completed.
    • Any violation of these rules will result in disqualification of entries, and possibly infraction.


    The entry stage will last sixdays, meaning it will close on Monday 25th January 2010 Monday 1st February 2010.

    The voting stage will begin immediately, and will be open for three days, ending on Thursday 28th January 2010 Thursday 4th February 2010.


    And this week's theme is (courtesy of Nobeler Than Lettuce): 20,000 miles high


    Be imaginative, have fun, and get writing


    Banzai


    PS: If you have any questions, please feel free to PM me. I don't bite (much).
     
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    Make-believe

    Make-believe

    Born in what was left of yesterday’s world,
    You thought you could come and tell me what was real,
    You tried to hide and seek,
    Thinking it was okay to delve in make-believe.
    I’ve been here before,
    Where you take your steps so lightly;
    I am not the child of yesterday’s war,
    I’ve been here much longer

    Tip toe,
    My being circumvents your desires
    For I tread carefully,
    Where you step so easily
    What is it like to live where you are?
    20, 000 miles away in a compass direction,
    It makes you think you’re 20, 000 miles high;
    So much higher

    Oh, so much nobler

     
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    Due to lack of entries, I've decided I'm going to extend the entry stage another week.
     
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    Location:
    Paradise, CA
    city morning

    bridge tops stretching out from mists and fogs
    reaching to heights searching out suns
    twenty thousand miles or more
    at least

    heavy moisture blanket as dew carpeting streets
    from top to bottom of towers thick gray menacing

    candle light defused in the murk of it
    sounds of creaking wood wheels muffled
    voices of shouting men muted

    morning has arrived
    or has it

    settling of denseness
    to milky water cream
    cloudless cold sky looks down
    blue and the bridge is touched

    morning has arrived
    to my dismay
     
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    NeverNeverland

    Will you fly with me?
    Up into my head,
    High enough to taste the stars,
    See the Moon, feel Mars,
    You dip your fingers into Fairy pools
    And ripple ripples across the sky,
    Where cherubs dart from here to there
    And Angles sing to the gardens above
    That forever flow with the waters of love.

    Will you fly with me?
    Deep into my soul,
    20,000 miles into the sea,
    Where monsters rest
    But never sleep,
    Where the Boogie Man
    And Grendel himself bake pancakes
    Of blueberry, buttermilk, and even,
    Super-duper chocolate chunks.

    Will you fly with me?
    Up into my head
    Where Fairies fly,
    Deep into my soul
    Where Beasties bake,
    And into my heart,
    Where spring's eternal
    And the whole world is yours.

    Oh won’t you fly with me!
     
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    The Dubai Crash

    Air-con’ed monoliths of able vanity,
    these challenging digits of sky-high ambition
    point to heaven, their gardens the architect’s image.

    Surging updrafts mix with fleshy desire,
    angular spines and breast-plates against the elements.
    Twenty-thousand eyeless sockets each tell a story.

    At its cloud-capp’d peak the ironwork spasms,
    junctions resonate and all possible geometries
    climax into a primal lightning conductor.
     
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    STS-51-L
    The engine roared,
    with smoke and flame,
    and in the pit,
    our stomachs remained.

    Our minds wandered,
    from glory to fame,
    the grasp of gravity,
    our engine tamed.

    Anxious were we,
    ascending higher and higher,
    but with a sudden thud,
    we were consumed by fire.

    Our sojourn was ended,
    when noon was nigh,
    into 20,000 pieces,
    20,000 miles high.
     
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