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    Weekly Poetry Contest (160) - The Idealistic Existence

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    Weekly
    Poetry Contest
    One Hundred and Sixty




    Poetrification time!


    The Rules
    • All entries must be on the set theme.
    • Only one entry per member.
    • No editing of entries once posted without my express permission (i.e. PM me and ask).
    • Poems must be titled
    • Entries must not have previously posted on the forums, and are not permitted to be posted for critique until AFTER the contest is completed.
    • Any violation of these rules will result in disqualification of entries, and possibly infraction.


    The entry stage will be open for seven days, closing on Monday 15th August 2011.

    The voting stage will begin immediately, and will be open for three days, ending on Thursday 18th August 2011.


    And this week's theme is: (courtesy of Jonathan22) The Idealistic Existence


    The next (161st) contest's theme will be: (courtesy of Sundae) Wisdom of Age, and it will be opened on Monday 15th August 2011.


    Be imaginative, have fun, and get writing.


    Banzai


    PS: If you have any questions, please feel free to PM me. I don't bite (much).
     
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    The Others

    Alive in a world where others only exist
    when I need them to; floating along alone,
    in felicity and completely content.

    Eyes closed, in absolute control,
    and emotionless; Just the way I like it.
    Silent; but the music in my mind
    knows exactly what I want to hear.

    This is the grin of someone
    who answers to no one but himself.
    This is the stride of a man
    who lives without consequence.

    I am a head-bobbing happiness machine.
    A smiling, dancing, singing
    example of life perfected.
    Using only those who stand to benefit me;
    All others may as well be unseen or dead.

    I care not for anything
    but personal paradise.
    My mind---a mirage;
    but existing inside is a brilliant
    oasis of self-satisfaction.
     
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    Montana
    Happiness

    Holy Horse of the Devil
    Trying to get to neon Heaven
    Laughing out loud wistful gallop
    Berating the artificial ceiling

    Can't stop the upwards decent
    You know that the fall is coming
    Like a helicopter seed
    Twisting into vacancy

    Will you ever find the answer?
    Does the light really exist?

    Hush little dragonfly
    Stop your buzzing
    Fall silently
    Softly
    To the floor
     
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    Living is fun when you lay in the sun
    And make love to your dog all year round
    But when you are done (and given the shun)
    Society screams you're the hound
     
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