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Weekly Poetry Contest (176) Voting

Poll closed Jan 5, 2012.
  1. skylendic wonder ~ Cacian

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  2. We buried the deer as best we could ~ aaron89

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  3. First Stars ~ astroannie

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  4. Stephanie ~ DeMarco

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    Weekly Poetry Contest (176) Voting - Pure Wonder

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Banzai, Jan 2, 2012.

    Weekly
    Poetry Contest
    One Hundred and Seventy Six
    Voting




    The first vote of the year!

    And this week's theme was: (courtesy of MrMormon) Pure Wonder

    Voting will end on Thursday 5th January 2012.

    Voting for yourself is entirely at your own discretion. I'm frankly sick of discussion on the matter, so any in here will be deleted. If you want to vote for yourself, go for it, but I personally wouldn't do that unless I genuinely believed mine was the best.


    The winning poem will be stickied for a week in the poetry contest.



    Oh, and if I catch anyone cheating, their entry will be removed from the contest and you will be unable to enter a poem into the contest for a month. Sorry to be such an ogre about this, I don't want to be, but rules are rules and are in place for valid reasons. If you can not follow the rules, you face the consequences.

    Best of luck to all entrants, and happy voting.


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    skylendic wonder
    By Cacian


    as dawn approaches
    lifting the clouds
    ahead
    of time,
    morning appears
    surfing the sets
    above the stars,
    a wind appeased
    floats and afree,
    perfumes of haze
    settle on waves
    breezes and sands.

    colours of thunder
    paint up a maze
    of pure wonder,
    a northern lights
    modernist twist
    of nature's wit,
    artful eclipse
    spacial in width
    cosmic in depth
    infinite zing,
    brilliance brings
    feelings of awe
    entranced and grips
    senses into
    a
    pixeldelic trip
    in wonder clips.
     
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    We buried the deer as best we could
    By aaron89


    We buried the deer as best we could
    in a hole we dug with a few flat rocks
    and a tarpaulin.

    We were too stunned or too stoned
    to say anything profound, but
    as you got back into the car

    you said, this will not be the last time
    I meet death, drunk and alone,
    under the moon on a country road

    and we laughed, first hysterically,
    then anxiously, as the flat rocks
    flecked with blood

    vanished in the rearview mirror.
     
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    First Stars
    By astroannie


    My eyes were born with cataracts--I couldn't see at all.
    The doctors did some surgeries when I was very small.
    I wore the thickest glasses but I didn't realize--
    Bilateral aphakia (no lenses in my eyes).

    The winter that I turned fifteen, a doctor came to town--
    A skilled ophthalmic surgeon; one of letters and renown.
    He lasered both my eyeballs and he cut through all the scars.
    Before I couldn't see the moon--now I could see the stars.

    We drove out to my auntie's house, its farmlands clad in snow.
    Where in the nigh-time sky there were a billion stars aglow.
    The northern constellations and the Milky Way outspread
    Looked glorious in ways my science teachers never said.

    Orion and his dogs I knew; the Pole star and the Square.
    Draconis as he weaved his way twixt cub and mama bear.
    The moon was shining in the west, no fuzzy smear of light;
    instead, she showed her crescent smile on this December night!
     
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    Stephanie
    By DeMarco


    You were bundled up in a blanket of blue
    Staring with your eyes - too an azure hue
    You looked too pretty to be true
    A gift from God you were; I knew.

    I could not help but be amazed
    As upon your tiny face I gazed
    Two sets of eyes were mistily glazed
    "She's like a doll!" the midwife praised.

    This tiny bundle so soft and mild
    Became a sweet, engaging child
    With a tomboy air, a little wild
    Still adoration upon you piled.

    You're a marvel, a wondrous thing to me
    Each day you grow with sweet beauty
    I can't believe the gift God gave to me
    You're my angel princess, Stephanie.
     
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