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    Weekly Poetry Contest (18) Winner Domoviye

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Raven, Sep 15, 2007.

    Domoviye


    Fractured

    So many places, which way?
    Towards the left?
    Towards the Right?
    Too many choices, all right here.

    The blind lady beckons,
    The owl takes flight.
    Through the keyhole is laughter,
    A hand moves amongst the trees.

    How do I get home?
    So many choices,
    Too many voices.
    Where can I go?

    The clock ticks down.
    The sun is setting.
    The child is going home.
    Which home is mine?

    A key hangs from the moon,
    Too high to reach.
    The night lilies open,
    The sun disappears.

    Scream to the night,
    Fall to the ground.
    Trapped, shivering, cringing,
    Inside my fractured mind.
     
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    Congrats Dom, a very fun and interesting peice. too bad to everyone else who entered also, they were all brilliant. :)
    Heather
     
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    YAY!!! I WIN!!!
    Thanks to everyone who voted for me.
    I'm kind of surprised I won though, I really liked one or two other poems a lot more then mine.
    Thanks
     
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    Congratrulations, Domoviye. It was a great poem, and you deserved your win.
     
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    Congratulations Domoviye you wrote an amazing piece.

    Well done to everyone else for your entries, they were most pleasant to read over.
     
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    Great job Domo!
    A worthy piece to lose too.
    well deserved :)
     
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    Thank you all.
    It's really, really appreciated.
     
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    A good poem and deserving win.
    Well written Dom
     
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    Congratulations and now that I'm back I should be able to again challenge!
     
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