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    Weekly Poetry Contest (90) - Crossroads

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    Weekly
    Poetry Contest
    Ninety







    Alrighty then! It's been a while since I did one of these, but let's give it a go shall we?


    The Rules

    • All entries must be on the set theme.
    • Only one entry per member.
    • No editing of entries once posted without my express permission (i.e. PM me and ask).
    • Poems must be a minimum of seven lines long
    • Poems must be titled
    • Entries must not have previously posted on the forums, and are not permitted to be posted for critique until AFTER the contest is completed.
    • Any violation of these rules will result in disqualification of entries, and possibly infraction.

    The entry stage will last seven days, meaning it will close on Friday 7th August 2009.

    The voting stage will begin immediately, and will be open for three days, ending on Monday 10th August 2009.


    And this week's theme is (courtesty of Palmer): Crossroads


    Be imaginative, have fun, and get writing :)


    Banzai


    PS: If you have any questions, please feel free to PM me. I don't bite (much).
     
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    Lost

    The path ahead is unclear,
    And I am at a crossroads.
    If I choose wrong,
    Much will be lost.
    I have no guide;
    Only my conscience.
    My heart says 'Don't move'
    But in my mind I know I must.
    I must move now.
    I must move correctly.
    I must take the road less traveled.
    I must take the path that is more difficult.
     
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    A Choice

    To arrive at such a destination after so long,
    Wandering without cause now, without scope.
    This path, mocking me, is so wrong,
    No sign, either way, to help, not even a hope.

    So, which way do I traverse down?
    To my left, my right, or straight before me?
    Or should I go back, just turn around?
    And never reach the end of my journey?

    For a day, I stand at the core of them all,
    Figuring still which way to progress.
    Without a decision, even when night falls,
    The best way to go would be just to guess.

    But do I dare come back, if it was a fault?
    For the past cannot be unwritten once made.
    And this thought makes every step halt,
    And then I realized, I've just been afraid;

    Afraid of what will happen, if it all turns awry.
    But to live life even with regrets, I should do,
    For a chance, an opportunity, should not be denied;
    I continue to walk, off the roads, my life renewed.
     
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    Location:
    Wolverhampton
    Zebra Crossing

    There's a woman in the bus deppo,
    Eating crisps,
    Wondering thoughts.

    Traveling by the 535
    Don't know why,
    Wonky eye.

    She's got on a nurses outfit,
    Does this mean she's nice?
    Maybe a disguise,
    Don't know why.

    A guy keeps looking at the nurse in a bus deppo,
    Filthy jeans,
    Yellow fingers.

    He tries to sell her a daysaver,
    "£3.50?",
    Don't know why.

    She nicked his wallet
    He didn't see,
    Blinded by his desperation.

    There's a thief in the bus deppo,
    She crosses roads,
    Marked black and white,
    Lane 1,2,3,
    She stops on 4,
    Don't know why.

    Is she a nurse, or is she a thief?
    "That lady stole my wallet, can you help me?"
    Here's my bus.
     
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    The only road


    The forky road,
    stirs thoughts indecisive,
    stabs the heart startled

    At the crossroads a stranger,
    foe, not familiar,
    impure, dark
    a demon of many tongues.
    with words he devours,
    what might be yours

    For gallant brings fortune,
    happiness, bliss, love,
    a maiden pure beauty
    no other will do.

    Leads astray the fool,
    to bitter end, the doom
    cuts the tongue,
    rips thine heart,
    claims it his den
    to scorn bends the letters
    woe for today, woe for tomorrow
    no other will do.
     
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    Just, like Robert Johnson

    At indecisive moments plucked from obscurity,
    when fighting fires in drowning slides of melt-water
    and star-speckled handouts of ash,
    some pipe-smoke cloud-tower defines a future:
    an anchor thrust into the conscience.

    An offer of co-orperation at his bare feet,
    the thick-necked artist stands mute.
    Just like Woody Allen and the Steve Miller Band,
    he must avoid the graveyard blues;
    burn your brightest! (Inevitable decay).
     
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    Location:
    Somewhere out there.
    The right path

    I haven’t lived a long life yet
    From childhood till today
    I did the things my parents said
    And followed the right way

    But slowly now I’m growing up
    And see the future’s near
    It’s going fast, it will not stop
    And thing still aren’t clear

    ‘cause suddenly there isn’t just
    one line for me to follow
    I see before me roads are crossed
    Four ways to go tomorrow

    How do I know
    Which path is mine
    Which one is right or not?
    Where should I go
    How will I find
    The spot that is my spot?

    And when it seems all hope is gone
    I realize suddenly
    Above in Heaven there’s Someone
    Who know the way for me

    It doesn’t matter where I am
    Somewhere on that crossroad
    Things will go as He has planned
    I will never be alone.
     
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    Choosing is deadly
    It kills you inside
    Outside
    Everywhere
    Two roads
    One path
    Where do I go?
    What should I do?
    Do I take the one less traveled?
    Do I take the one more traveled?
    Each has their positives and
    Negatives
    But I took the one less traveled
    It leads me to who I want to be
    And where I should go
     
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    Through the intersection lay a sign,
    bent over, cracked, split in two.
    The surrounding area was ensnared
    with the piercing yell of tires locked,
    rubbing harshly across the pavement
    onto the grass. The sign read
    "Cross road."
     
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    Location:
    Winnipeg, Canada
    Where Love Overlaps

    Parallelogram streets
    Criss crossing at crazy angles
    Like a line through my heart
    That beats an uneven rhythm
    As tires pass over manhole covers…slip slap…

    The echoes of traffic
    Soft whine…engines out of tune
    Stopping and stalling and starting again
    Reflections of my not so stellar inner workings
    And my failed attempts at love

    Indecisive intersections
    Each one a fragmented road
    There are no signs
    There are no speed limits
    And I foolishly race ahead
    Knowing inside that,
    again,
    I have chosen wrong
    But still, I cannot stop.
     
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    Tell Me Which Way

    What would You do
    If I just stayed here
    Here
    Just laid down, eyes staring up
    What?
    Yes My eyes. My cement snow colored eyes.
    Anyway.
    Laid here
    Here in this sickly sweet freshly cut grass and pretended the moon was cheese
    Waxy cheese, with holes
    Yeah I like that
    And ignored You.
    And Your silly demands.
    Would you please stop screaming?
    Your screams are getting tangled in the stars
    Dim, they’re getting dim, they can’t breathe, you’re…
    You’re STRANGLING them!
    You’re killing the stars, You, yes You!
    They’re falling, cutting the sky into thin strips more blue than black
    Bruises.
    The forests, the cities, the penguins
    all turning black, stained with tarry night sky air.
    The sky is falling, rolling and tumbling towards the earth
    In fat, juicy drops, splatter painting the world
    And it’s all your fault.
    Fine.
    I said fine!
    If you’re going to make me choose
    No, no, I won’t get out of the car
    No, it just rained anyway, the grass would be all wet and spongy
    Then I say we turn left
    Left!
    What’s wrong with left?
    Well why didn’t you so! Jese.
    Five minutes
    Five whole minutes I spent at this
    Crossroad.
     
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    Location:
    My own lonely cocoon
    Restless at rest

    I waited...
    as long as I could.
    but a step to be taken-
    left, right, forward!
    they say,
    not doing a thing
    is in fact deciding not to do anything.
    So I can't stand still-
    no more!

    I have had enough at the crossroad.
    I have lost, broken,
    fallen apart
    from the ones I loved.
    Now it's time- just move ahead!
    loose forever or reunite.
    as hard as it may seem,
    as silly as it might turn out to be,
    I got to go now.

    I need to start a real journey-
    Enough at the crossroad!
     
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    He took me to a place where the crossroads were unmarked
    Away from the double roundabouts, box junctions and red rimmed signs
    And their attempts to impose order upon chaos.
    He taught me how to judge the right of way
    With concentration instinct and awareness
    My grip unclenched
    The bucking braying beast was gradually tamed
    Until its purring resonated within me
    As the three of us sat poised, defying gravity on a 1 in 5
    At one with the bite.
    Until my foot released the clutch
    With fluid grace
    Toyota Tai Chi
     
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    I take this path

    I'm Percy Wade
    -------------------------------I'm Selina Myles
    Just your average man------------------------Maybe something new
    I choose to live my life------------------------I choose to live my life
    Just because I can----------------------------For goals I must pursue

    I try to find the reasons-----------------------I choose to make the purpose
    To do things I do-----------------------------To do the things I should
    Just to pass the seasons?---------------------Not the things that hurt us
    I find this to be true---------------------------But to do all kinds of good

    There was this one girl------------------------There was this one boy
    Who taught me to be frank--------------------Who taught me how to dream
    The facts of life she all unfurled-----------------The fun of life and adventure's joy
    I have her to thank----------------------------And the meaning of extreme

    It was all eternities ago-----------------------It was not very long ago
    When I was but a child-----------------------When I was young, forlorn
    I would trot around and play in snow----------I would play alone and bask in woe
    Mulling of worlds so wild----------------------Living life to mourn

    ---------------------We would knock at each other's doors-----------------
    ---------------------To spend some time together-------------------------
    ---------------------We'd laugh out loud and hide in drawers---------------
    ---------------------Just like birds of a feather----------------------------

    I would dream of knights and mystic swords---I would dream of nights on empty streets
    In a land of nymphs and magic----------------Looking for a way home
    Dragons aloft and stentorian hordes-----------Shadows astray on cold concrete
    And deaths by no means tragic----------------And dubious phantoms roam

    But my ideals were not perpetual--------------But my despondence was ephemeral
    And the naivete did not last-------------------And the anguish did not last
    Now I see things factual-----------------------Now I renounce the natural
    And no longer cling to the past----------------And eye a world so vast

    As the moons bleed a varnished crimson-------As the suns rejoice a mellow hue
    Black and White collide------------------------White and Black collide
    A forgotten deed is tarnished in prison---------A cherished choice bellows askew
    And the road I took has died------------------And the roads alas, divide

    Will the roads meet again?--------------------Will the roads meet once more?
    The answer I don't know----------------------I'm sure they will one day
    But I shall live my life till then-----------------And if they part just like before
    And wait until I go----------------------------To join, they'll find a way
     
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