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    weekly poetry contest entry

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by madholman23, Oct 22, 2007.

    DARK POEM

    I am a sad sad man,
    I am lonely
    I howl my sadness and my detachment out at stars
    I feign would blow them out
    so foul I find their gentle being they
    Merely stay lit and twinkle-tinkle
    do nothing else.
    If they would CONTRIBUTE, COOPERATE
    I might find them tolerable.
    As things stand
    They do not cooperate
    nor contribute. They behave
    Like little mongoloid boy-men
    No place for them here let them die
    we'll eat them
    I drew taut spirit's bow
    let fly my arrow at the wrong foe no star this
    and missed
    I missed Sol.
    The zone is good to him.
    Despite his evasion of my pursuit.
    Despite his evasion of my pursuit
    He, like me, is one smooth professional.
    Now I hear rustling swift
    ker-plonk, onk, onk, drip, squirt, dribble, squirt
    moist echoes of a distressed whore
    That Ho
    100% surely right foe
    unmistakeable old whore
    fouled, dying
    She'd been bled, unmistakeable Foe Ho
    (Not only the Stars fail to cooperate in this hell.)
    And the old whore swirled up into a dry vapor redolent of old flesh and excessive perfume, high, high up it swirled, overlooking the night.
    This cruel scent.
    I am a sad sad man
    I am lonely
    Shall it rain? Let it come down!
    LET THE CRUELTY RAGE!
    I shall endure.
     
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    where is the 'official' thread for this week's contest?... and where the heck did you find the theme posted, mad h?... why can't i find the current week's entry rules 'n regs?
     
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