Hello, so I am new to this forum and wanted to give details of the series of books I have been working on/ writing for a long time. I try to fit in many different genres to make them interesting while following one characters main journey but I wanted to know what would make them stand out or if there is anything holding them back from being better than they are. I'll go through them: The first deals with an island adventure where a young shy 15 year old boy gets a letter from a science company saying he is invited to a holiday to an island as part of an experient. He goes and finds he is staying with his crush and a guy he doesn't like. There is friction between him and the guy as they both like the girl. At the same time there is an emergance of supernatural evil creatures which all three must deal with on the island. There is a strong mystery thriller feel to this one. The second deals with the guy moving on from it and finding out the creatures are coming back to his city in a subtle way while he finds out his crush is moving on & getting married. He ends up having to save her from her wedding after an invasion of the creatures while they realise they have feelings for each other. The third is where the 2 are together and the guy finds out he is destined to kill the race of the creatures from a foreign old man who contacts him. He finds out their backstory and that they are dangerous and out to get certain individuals for blood and to take over the world. The individuals end up kidnapped and he has to train and become a warrior in order to actually defeat the boss of the creatures on their planet and potentially destroy the planet itself which is the home of all the evil creatures. The fourth one involves the aftermath of the last one where his girlfriend is in a coma and he must retrive a rose to wake her. He also finds out spirits remain of the creatures and are possesing humans and animals. He has to also stop and send back the spirits. He also finds out that there is a gang forming while he is trying to get by in the city. He must defeat a member. The fith one continues on from the fourth it has a more casual feel and is more about relationships of the main hero while he finds the gang have formed a company and are performing dodgy acts over the city as well as creating harmful robots. The girlfriend wakes up but has lost her memory and one of his best friends is seduced into joining the gang/ company which is supported by the creatures. One of his female friends gets involved with a guy who turns out to be a member of the gang (a humanoid) and almost kills her which gives the main guy clues as to what is going on. The sixth one is split into 3 and I haven't yet even started writing it but the 6.1 one deals with the main guy actually joining a supernatural defence league to be on top of it all. Since the guy has powers he basically becomes a vigilante of the city to make sure he knows what is always happening. He joins forces with his friends and they find out the company have their own building and are planning on making products which are very harmful. They try to constantly hurt and kill the main C. 6.2 is another adventure and as he is a vigilante he becomes a superhero. The main guy also moves on from his girlfirend (who has her memory back). She realises she comes from somewhere else. (Another planet). 6.3 and the final one after are about the company trying to take over the world and the defensive one trying to stop all of their efforts. There is alot of conflict in the relationships as the main guys' once friend has turned rouge and the previously defeated boss returns. He kinda gets with another girl (she is more suited to him) who works at the defence league and he has to deal with life as a superhero. So this is a very brief and abrdiged version of the synopsis. It is mostly fantasy for all but there is a Sci-Fi feel to the third one and a comedic feel to the fifth one. They all have adventure and action though however some have a bigger scope than others. I would like to hear your thoughts and hear if there is anything to be seen that could be imroved. Thanks!