I'm currently working on a thriller. After a lot of contemplation, I thought up a brilliant protagonist, who would feature in the series I have planned. Tell me what you think of him. NAME Jack Barker AGE 34 DOB 23/8/1975 MILITARY RANK Air Flight Commander Jack Barker PHYSICAL ATTRIBUTES 6” 3. Black hair. Blue eyes. Physical condition outstanding, coming from experience with Special Air Service and Royal Navy. SKILLS First Grade marksman. High-quality weapons officer. Excellent hand-to-hand combat. Class 3 Pilot Licence (CIVILIAN and MILITARY). EDUCATION First Class Honours degree for Information Technology. First Class Honours degree for Current Affairs Technology. Proficient in French, Spanish, German, and Italian. Basic Russian known. OCCUPATION(S) Royal Navy 800 Naval Air Squadron (BAE Harrier GR7/9)(1993-2002). 22 Special Air Service Regiment Sabre Squadron Troop One (2002-2006). Department of Foreign Operations (2006-present) Any extra ideas. Is this guy too cliché? This is just a character outline, I would flesh him out much more in the novel.