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    Will you help me edit and improve my essay?

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by AprilRosedw, Sep 20, 2009.

    I am writing an essay for my high school English class. I do not have peers to review my essay. I want to improve my essay by making the sentences flow together.

    Any suggestions?

    If anyone is willing to help I will post it. I am finishing the conclusion.

    My assignment was to write a personal essay on any subject of my life.

    The essay is about who I am, who I want to be and my aspirations.

    I have written the essay but I'm unable to improve it without peer suggestions.
     
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    No. This site will not give detailed assistance on homework assignments.
     
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